MeadowLark

Hi there! This is going to be one of my unhelpful reviews. I just enjoyed reading this too much to actually realize anything wrong with it. I enjoy how you ...

Hi there. Just a note, I haven't read the chapters previous to this so I will not be commenting on the plot. Just minor details I noticed ;) When you ...

Chrome is defiantly awesome...but sometimes it doesn't load pictures for me. Totally annoying in a sense. It may also be because my internet is uber slow. Ugh, dial up I ...

Excellent work Tiff! I know I used to be a little guilty for posting almost right away. But, after reviewing pieces that are just riddled with errors, you come to ...

Love the hat Hannah ;)

8/10 because it sounds funny and because I have no idea what it's off of.

I sighed as we arrived at the dark forest green door. The white mansion seemed to loom above us and my mother knocked. A man in uniform answered the door ...

Hiya! I spotted your second chapter so realized I should read the first...and then decided to review it. So, here it goes! I blew on the black scribbles, hoping the ...

Heya there! Just a note, I never read the original, and so there will be no comparisons. Mayhap I'll read it after...This review will most likely just involve pointers on ...

Happy Birthday Dem!

Haha, cute. 7/10

Hiya! Wowza, this was quite different but a intriguing at the same time. Although, I must say, I was confused in some areas. And so, off to the review! She ...

It's a little...odd 4/10

Not at the moment but I have succeeded in scaring my sisters Pomeranian several times now! TUBM is fascinated by history

Hiya there. Ah, writer's block. Don't ya hate it? This is an interesting start to an interesting story, if you don't mind me being frank. The first paragraph, however, seems ...