MeadowLark

Well, it was pretty interesting, I'll admit that. But you must remember to place spaces between a period, comma, etc. Like I've been doing. Also, your i's need to be ...

I read all this last night and I enjoyed it all. But I thought it was a lot of information to digest and to remember. A lot of names too. ...

I've started another story. This one was inspired by a dream (like most of my stories) I had a month ago. Harsh reviews are always welcome. Pick it apart but ...

Oh this was pretty cool. It hooked me in right away. I was disappointed in how short it was. I was getting into it. Darceel. I like that name. It ...

This was pretty interesting. I really liked it. Except, what is the girls' name? Well I spotted a few little mistakes. Here they are. She broke threw the shadows and ...

This was pretty creepy. This whole story has been creepy since the first posting. It's also so very interesting and I'm hooked. I'm curious to know what happens next. It's ...

Oh you were right. I really did like this chapter, it was awesome! I can't believe Peter (aka Hangover Guy :lol: ) just joined in the mob. Like wow :shock: ...

It's always good to have a chapter in your story where there is no action, because not everyone's life is action packed day after day. Except I didn't think this ...

Phoey! I was really interested in this! A circus is so awesomeI I haven't read practically nothing on a cirucs, and here I found one and you aren't even going ...

This was pretty interesting and I liked it, but yet I didn't like it. If that makes any sense. I was a little confused at certain parts. Allison was being ...

This was for your english? Wow, that's pretty cool. I wish my english would let me write stories instead of stupid essays. But whatever. It was a really interesting story ...

Wow, that is one evil mother. That poor girl is gonna get tortured. But anyways... There was a lot of talkign, as mentioned above, and I thought there wasn't enough ...

I enjoyed this. It was pretty cool and interesting. I noticed a few mistakes here and there and if I can find them again... In the old tounge khy meant ...

This was a pretty interesting read. And I can't believe you just started writing in English like four months ago. So cool! Not much to say here since everyone else ...

Yea! Clover's back! I was hoping the next chapter would come be coming soon lol. I thought it was great. Like congrats to all the chicks there at the inn ...