McPheever

Ohhh..thank you very much. Very good improvement. After rereading it, I saw that it was very akward...and one moan was definitely enough. I think I got carried away with it ...

This is still a prologue...a very long one at that. I'm just here to critique the prologue enjoy and tell me your thoughts^_^ ******* "Huhhhh....." whimpered a small naked lump ...

I know this may sound very bad Clover Madison, but Mary Beth is actually only about 9. I want to picture her as a very "disturbed", but eloquent heroine. I ...

^_^ Thank you very much for the warm welcomes. And I'll be sure to post "something" up.

I'm such a fickle thing. If my muse could give me one gift...then it would have to be consistency. One day, inspiration hits me like a truck..then another day I ...

First of all:0, I have to say you did a wonderful job in the last paragraph. Your description of the butterfly, and it's wings were so vivid, but smooth. I ...

That's awesome^_^ Good job! And guess what? I also made it to state, but I had to stop from there too. My project "The Rise and Fall of the Golden ...

"Mistake!? More like a F****** trip! My mistake was killing my daughter" ~ Norman Grent If you could be anyone else that you know....who would it be?

My favorite story from Roald Dahl is definitely FAntastic Mr. Fox. My 8 year old mind read it, and loved it.

Allright, I've just finished my literary analysis for my English class, and looking for some opinions about it. My literary analysis focuses on what I personally learned in the play, ...

Oh Thank you very much Crysi for deleting my double post :D . I had clicked on submit two times, because I thought it had locked up on me^_^. And ...

Welcome to YWS, McPheever! (...I love the screename.) ^_^ Ah, I didn't vote on the poll, I'm afraid - I've never actually seen American Idol...and I don't know any of ...

Okay, this is my first post, and I really don't want to sound like a total dweeb, so I guess I'll just tell everyone a few interesting things about myself. ...