McMourning

A good way to get us in is to get us to relate, and care for your characters. Your characters are flat-ish cardboard. Try character development techniques, try to make ...

Thanks, Lucy! Although, the reason I used "sis" in her blog is to show that Cass is still human, is still a teen using short-script. I have seen several recent ...

Hmm...I don't know whether to start a new thread or to post it here. So, here's the slightly revised version. There are descriptions on why actions occur during the conversation ...

See, now that, makes sense. I needed that "no jelly" part to understand. Okay, so right now I'm working on adding DETAILS. I have some ideas in my head, that ...

See, I don't get why it doesn't make any sense. It all makes perfect sense to me. Of course, that's the part I need help with: some of my peers ...