McMourning

The title doesn't suit it well. It's about pain and suffering, not an illness. Pulling a phrase from your poem, it could be "The Demons Call". I agree with Kylan ...

Well, I don't have a problem with it being questions. I know that isn't typical of a poem, but I thought that it still had a good flow, which I ...

Well, I know no French, but I think it works, to some degree. It gives a little bit of character, but it shouldn't be used as frequently as it is. ...

Hmm...It's interesting. The deities’ statues were very beautiful. They were smiling at us trying to tell an invisible reality, I like "an invisible reality". I don't think, though, that you ...

Sorry, but I don't like #7. It's been done before.

More or less a dream I had Here Fiction 580 words I usually write longer pieces, but I don't know what to do with this. Do you have any ideas? ...

Hi. I don't even remember Jurassic Park , but I know I watched it. I like that you pulled in some fiction. I think it reminds us that science can ...

Hmm...I wouldn't say it's bad, but it certainly isn't an inspirational quote. It is and isn't true. I'm not going to argue for one side or the other, but you ...

Hi. I was 15 when I died and brought back to life, well I'm not really sure if I am human or not, I mean I still do the things ...

Hi, I think Lena and Juniper made some good points, but I wanted to tell you that I liked it. It is a little too short, though. It doesn't tell ...

Sheriff Adam Thompson stepped out of his front porch to find his neighbors, the Flints, huddled around their car, holding hands. Pastor Flint was speaking aloud praying for a safe ...

To be honest, I don't have a clue about the show Total Drama . So, I can only really come at this from a grammatical and spelling perspective. Right from ...

I saw this post the other day, and it did make me get the book out of the library, but I think your review could have some more detail. You ...

Hi. I'm not sure if that part about pills fits with the rest of the poem, the reminiscing. I also found a few typos. If your computer doesn't have a ...

Hi. Your story was long, but it held my attention. It's interesting that the girl's stories can help her. I've sort of seen that before, in the movie Twitches , ...