McMourning

Monkey's are cartoonish. (But dragons aren't.)

No offense meant, just showing my team spirit: M. ost O. bvious N. ame K. alling E. veryone Y. ummy D. eadly R. eptiles A. gainst G. orrilas, O. rangutans, ...

Well, anybody who thinks from the merest trace of a mascot dragon that YWS is a fantasy site.That person is a DUNDERHEAD and we are better off without them. You ...

"Quite a bit, actually. None of us have a running count or anything, though, " Cap'n Kiwi "Hmm....I know doctors aren't supposed to kill...but, I killed a bunny for dinner ...

Mace

"Band? Aren't those the music groups that disbanded in the 23rd century? Sorry, never seen one, because they no longer exist," Cap'n Cherry Kiwi "I never saw one in concert. ...

"About seven months ago, to celebrate the news that I was pregnant for my second time! It wasn't 'going out' in the same sense as before I was pregnant, but ...

Land

"My feet," Cherry Kiwi "The not-so-reliable bus," Dani Doly Darbeth (Of my newest creative work. Cass, Anna, and Li will return periodically, as I finish off their short.) If you ...

Send

"I don't need a valid reason to betray my love. I do it all the time, and I do it just because I want to," Anna "Hmm...I'd only betray David ...

"Well, I already admitted to anorexia, so I guess it'd be...wait! You're trying to get me to give away all of my secrets! No! No! No!," Cass, jumping up and ...

"What could be more horrible than my life?" Cass "Run! Hide! I can't look at that stupid fanfiction! My adoring fans must be crazy! Run! Hide!" Anna If you could ...

"No! I would rather starve. After all, starving is what got me this 'bootyiful' body," Cass, placing gaunt hands on narrow hips "Heck no! those come from nature. I adore ...

2. Have you read through your entire story/poem? It's amazing how much one more read through can catch. If your work isn't full of little mistakes your critiques can focus ...