McMourning

Hello, again! I was looking forward to read this story, when you first proposed the idea of the Watchers. And, I'm glad I read it today. My first few years ...

Give your thoughts, descriptions, opinions whatever... Since you asked for my thoughts, I'm not going to mention the Bible. Sorry, no offense meant towards it, it's just that the Bible ...

Hello! The most obvious answer would be in Silicon Valley, but I imagine she's long gone from there and is now with Pat and his Barbie buddies.

Hello! I absolutely adored that! (Which is the highest compliment I believe I have ever given out.) This piece truly could be published, but you'd have to find just the ...

You could say something like: As the years went by, he grew more and more mature. Finally, at his twentieth birthday, others realized he was not the little boy he ...

For essays/articles, I make an outline. If I already have all my research done, it's usually very detailed and I end up just having to add punctuation to turn it ...

THERE ARE NO PEOPLE IN THIS WORLD!! I was thinking the same thing....more and more people are acting like animals....pigs especially. But pigs can be very good natured, like Snoink.

The Community Almost everyone is nice here, even when they're reviewing a work. No one, that I have seen, has trash-talked someone or someone's work. Any teasing is done out ...

Hello! I enjoyed reading it, probably because it wasn't overly romantic. There were some punctuation errors, besides what OFour found. The bus driver began to close the doors but I ...

Welcome, Sean! It nice that you have part of your story in your blog. But be sure to place part of it in the Literary forum, as well. There, more ...

Hello! It's definitely "other" for me. I pretty much just listen to soundtracks, from musicals not movies. It's probably not that "cool", but I like it.

Hello! I agree with Siegfried...we're not going to steal you ideas. We all take that risk when we post our pieces on the Literary forums. Someone could steal our idea. ...

Ian Perry is a tall boy, who sticks out like a sore thumb. Mrs. Coward

Ebony is a pale-skinned girl, with a very delicate touch. Even her voice is soft, almost like a whisper. Mrs. Coward

"I'm not one for emotions--I chuck the cards," Cass "I have the huge collage, on my bedroom wall, of all the greeting cards I've gotten. It starts with my adoption ...