-
Re: Character dialogue
Is it morally acceptable to kill at all? Sure, I'd like to kill some people for calling me [nick]names, or making fun of me. But, I really don't think I ...
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: Paragraphs
This has risen from the fact I'm juggling three GCSE english essays and the paragraphing style I use on then is not very good for stories but I've integrated them ...
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: Why Stars are important to society
I'm writing a series of articles (basically a newsletter) for my friends, who are so different minded that it's a wonder they all get along. Anyway, I thought it'd be ...
Apr 6, 2007 -
Re: Character Answer Game
Absolutely not. I would not kill another human being in the name of God, because that is not God's way. I wish to follow in God's way, because I truly ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: First Paragraph Feedback
sounds like something from the Uglies , because the towns were so obsessed with beauty. So, maybe they went as far as to pick people's perfect mate, so the children ...
Apr 5, 2007 -
Re: finding a publisher
Thanks for clearing that up, Brad!
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: finding a publisher
Thanks!
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: finding a publisher
I would reccomend getting an agent who would know a bit more about the business and who would help you find the perfect publishing match. Agent hunting is another long ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: Upon A Kiss
Wow! That took my breath away--it was an amazing poem. You've obviously got talent. til one we are It's till not til. Or, you could use 'til, which is short ...
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: HOLA!
Bienvenidos a YWS! ¿Hablas español? P.S. I love your avatar, or maybe I just love pandas. :) Enjoy, McMourning
Apr 3, 2007 -
Re: How fast can you type?
I've done much better before: Test: Wizard of Oz 46 wpm 5 errors Net: 44 wpm 96% accuracy
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Make Up The Worst Possible Opening Line Ever
I’m not Paula, I’m her husband. She’s dead. I still can’t believe it as I type this. I actually used this once, but it was just because I was bored, ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Filling in the words
I was trying to make it fit together, but the last stanza is odd. A Blue Moon Night By McMourning Orange parrots Fly ahead In the darkening sky. The vicious ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Title Feedback
A former pop star is the leader of a rock band. While on their tour, they run into trouble and run away from it. I might pick it up just ...
Apr 2, 2007 -
Re: Uglies
It's okay, I wasn't trying to point at you. I know that you aren't the only one who messed up.
Apr 2, 2007
