McMourning

Hello! I enjoyed the present tense; it fits the scene better than a flashback would. The scene works alone, and probably could develop into a short story. Readers wouldn't need ...

I'd like to be reinstated! Thanks.

Oh, I guess I wasn't paying attention. Thanks, Imp!

I probably know this somewhere in my brain, but I can't remember how to access saved drafts. I thought it was under "My Stuff", but that's only my watched topics ...

Hello! It almost seemed like I was there in the room, standing at the foot of Charlie's bed. I was mad when the nurse cam to kick us out of ...

Hello! It was not at all too wordy! Words are great when describing a scene or setting the mood of the story. However, I am confused about the connection between ...

Hello! It was nicely written, although, the title isn't really explained. Perhaps you could have more on the fact that a mimeograph reproduces these dark words. men of world tongues, ...

Hmm...sounds like one person is faking her smile, when underneath it all, she has tears. Her mother has died, her brother's in the hospital, she's in debt up to her ...

Hello! I don't mean to be rude, but this piece needs an overhaul. That's all right, though. I didn’t answer but I just got up and walked towards my room. ...

10,000 posts???

But it does mean I have to pick a name, and that means I have to have a gender. If that's the case, couldn't you just pick a name that's ...

Hello! I've only done speeches that I've written. But, I do know that they all start at the same place: research. While researching a topic or person you're interested in, ...

Congrats, Snoink! It's great that there's someone who reviews often. Thanks!

sounded professionally done. Honestly, I have read published poems like that. So, congrats! Her letting go was not a chore, But letting go required more. Now, this is just me ...

Thanks, Clau! I'm feeling much better already.