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Re: Breaking the cycle of poverty
Hi. I could tell that you spent a lot of time researching and writing. So, I commend you on that. An other was the dot com bubble in the share ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: That Fair Evening
Hi. her frozen winds lick my bare limbs I like this, because most people don't say that the wind is licking them. So, it calls a new image to mind, ...
Sep 13, 2009 -
Re: The "I'm Back" Thread
Well, I don't think I've posted in over a year. And, I've changed a lot over that time. I don't really write short stories any more. But, I do kind ...
Sep 12, 2009 -
Re: Poem For Hot Days
Hello! By quite a vivid image of berries you're definitely on the right track-readers love details like that. I commend you for that, but it's not so much the over ...
Jun 10, 2008 -
Re: Character Answer Game [2]
A lot of celebrities are too perfect for their own good...I remember, many years ago, there was this show on Disney Channel-- Hannah Montana --I think. The actress on that ...
Apr 15, 2008 -
Re: Eyes
Hey! And the bowels of the earth I shook There's something awkward about his line. I don't think that using "depth" will help...I think it would be better if you ...
Apr 1, 2008 -
Re: Friends of another kind
Hey! I liked your poem, because it sort of surprised me. I was thinking you were going to be talking about imaginary friends, not books. But, hey, books are great ...
Apr 1, 2008 -
Re: Love is in the internet
Hello! I was actually very surprised by how this turned out. I expected something about internet dating, but there's nothing about that in here. The title doesn't work with the ...
Jul 7, 2007 -
Re: Alphasmart
I thought the Alphasmart was made by Dana. Never tried it myself, but we have some kids in our school who are allowed to use them. They seem like a ...
Jun 30, 2007 -
Re: English vs. American
Thanks! I understand you didn't mean just me, but it was important for me to say that I wasn't trying to start a fight. MM
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Awakening Ch.1
Hello! How many summers had he spent here. It's a question. He remembered a...woman....NO....man : old with crinkled, rough feature s like worn parchment, bending over him...Yes...YES.... I've bring b
Jun 23, 2007 -
Re: Hola, Everyone!!! :)
Welcome back! Nice avatar.
Jun 22, 2007 -
Re: English vs. American
Nope, the thread is 'English [ie. British English] vs. American.' Well, I'm sorry. I took English as the language not as the people. Therefore it would not be just the ...
Jun 22, 2007 -
Re: English vs. American
I thought the metro was French? It's one of those words that is used in several languages: English, French, Spanish. I'm not sure if that isn't a regional or denominational ...
Jun 22, 2007 -
Re: English vs. American
So I guess new Zealand English is really messed up. It's not messed up, it's just another variation. Like Puerto Rico has another variation of American English. (I think my ...
Jun 22, 2007
