Mazey

Hello :) I just found your story today, and my... is it entrancing. I read all the way to Chapter 17 in one sitting, and I've never done that before ...

My writing posture... hmm... haha.... let's not delve too far into that? *Looks around, hoping her doctor isn't reading this post*, okay, I'll talk. My posture is horrible. Like most ...

This is really good (and you're right, it was long! but I don't mind, I love reading stories, especially fantasy.) I could do a nit-picky review of grammar and spelling, ...

Thank you, Rachael. You had amazing advice, and that was an incredible article. :D

These are some very good tips, Eloquent. Rosey had a good point, as well. I felt I could put my few cents in on prose while we're on the topic. ...

So, I am writing a fantasy novel, and I had a question about my main character (she's a girl). She has red hair, red/demonic eyes (it's a part of the ...

For advanced gauche-masters, the subtle art of pretending to not notice might be an even more effective way of causing fidgeting in your very amicable partner. LOL! Okay, so I'm ...

Here's me... =D The last one was me being silly with my webcam... hehehehehehehehhe. They just look so innocent in their little car... I had to do something to interrupt ...

This has to have one of my favorite endings to a poem =) I can feel the pain in this poem, and the longing to go back to that time ...

Ahhh! I want to know what she wrote on the Post-it note! I want to know so bad! And I want to know what's happening! I get the feelings of ...

This was short and sweet =D Everybody knows you can't outrun your own shadow, but I had no choice. I had to get away from the terrible darkness which clung ...

I really like this poem, it was different from most of the other poems you find on here. It was really good. The only thing that did get me was ...