Mazey

Edit: I'm so sorry! I don't know why, but my review posted twice! (Grr, how much do I want to bet that it's my slow internet connection due to this ...

Alright, as much as I want to make this as positive as possible... I'm not going to lie... This chapter seemed a little rushed. I mean, I get what's going ...

AHH! This is great! Such a twist, I never expected it! Oh my goodness! I love your description :) The way you twist it in between the action is splendid, ...

Oooh, this is getting tight! You have a wonderful way of putting the setting in front of the readers. There's a flow about your writing that is absolutely perfect. It's ...

As writers... well... I just had this crazy idea for a metaphor: Writing is like being the President. Anything you do is going to be criticized - down to every ...

Hey, Aero! I'm Mazey :) So, first off... no ond, and I mean no. one. can have enough onomatopoeia! It's such a rarely used thing (for lack of a better ...

Oooh, with the throne being Maximillion's... the intensity just went up by, like, a lot of notches! Hehehe, *impatiently waiting for the next chapter*. (P.S. ahem *cough*, sconCes (with a ...

Hey there! Do you mind if I call you Drac, instead of DraconiaxLesoto? So, I liked the prologue. There was an air of mystery, and you wrote it well. There ...

Hello, waitingfor life :) Soo... I thought that you started the chapter off really well. It's was sort of like "Oh, he's relaxed in a chair", and then - BAM! ...

I edited a little bit of it, and if you care to read it again - it's really just descriptions. If you don't want to read it again - Mazey ...

I especially loved the opening. It was different, it was unique. May I commend you on your amazing ability to create such dramatic scenes in such a short and quickly ...

This is my first novel here on YWS - feel free to give me the "red carpet" review... so be as brutal and honest as possible. I'm very open to ...

Ahhh, I needed that laugh. :) I can just see you laughing maniacally all the way through this poem (at least, I know I would have been). It brings joy ...

I can't believe that - as long as I've been writing - I've never even heard of conflict charts! I thank thee for introducing them to me. Thank you so ...

Hello Geronimo :) I'm Mazey, and I think we met in chat... but anyways, I'm here to review. (By the way, your summary of the story caught my eye and ...