Mattie

Well for starters, I fret about like, everything! About how long it'll take to get my teeth white with Crest Whitestrips, Movies, Books, Questions that I didn't know the answer ...

Hey, I thought it really get's started fast and jumps right into the story, I like that. No drawn out or long prolougs or what ever you might have. :) ...

I thought you did great with the imagery, really pictured it in my mind. Is there some hidden meaning? -Mattie*

Okay, for one, I think Misty and Mouse did a great job of crit. your story, therefore, I have nothing. I do have one thing I want to say: What's ...

My Chemical Romance and Lillix!

I'm not sure this is exactly "romantic" but I did my best! DINAH HAD BEEN watching them all night. She couldn’t help it, couldn’t hold back her fascination. It was ...