Mattie

I too like this and hope to read more from you! I like the main character and the characters Sam had said she had liked. Your discriptions are vivid and ...

I would have to agree with who Kay-Kay agreed with. :) Your vocab does seem rushed and crammed like you're trying to impress someone just as DarkerSarah had said. I ...

There were quite a bit of akward sentences but that didn't make me not like it because I really did like it. Very poetic just as ohhewwo had said. I ...

I liked this a lot. Not only does it have an unique character but it it also a very well written short story. I think you should post more of ...

I see you're not getting off to a good start with people crit. your stuff. That's why I'm going to take the time to critique it. It does need to ...

Just a question. I seem to be getting zero replies and one at the most. Tons of views! No replies. I also critique peoples writing so don't say, "Oh, well, ...

I found some more stuff that I skipped over when posting that part. Here's what you wrote: I turned and looked out over the weed infested yeard. What once had ...

Hey Emma, I really like this peice. It really reveals things about the character that you would probably never know. It runs smoothly and has good discriptions. I DO agree ...

I'm crazy for stuff like this! If you were to come into my room you'd know it was true. I hope to read more and be able to critique the ...

It may not appeal to most you guys, but I wanted to post it anyways. It was on a dream though so it might not be the best... Madison stood ...

I don't like long, over the Internet relationships. They just do not work out. What would you do if you kissed a frog and it turned into your prince charming?

I like it also. Nothing to really critique on! Keep it up! I really enjoyed reading your work! It sticks out, but in a good way. :)

You write very well for an 18 year old. You seem to know where you want to take this story. Very good plot line, you did great with details and ...

Hey Misty. This co-write you're doing with Erin is great! I finally got around to reading it and I think it's a lot better with two people working on it. ...

A friend is helping me on this, it's not done yet. Slippery when Wet. 1: Terri stepped out of the house, and locked the door quietly. She turned around hastily, ...