Mattie

I did like it but think you could have put more into it and added more. It would have made it better, you don't really need the commas since it ...

I agree that it was good and all the corrections were already made. I like your idea on popularity although not all popular people act like bitches. Sorry for my ...

Hey I liked this as well as everyone else said! I liked the ending though and thought you did a great job! Love the title too!

Misty Lynn, I know this is old but I never got around to reading it on RK so I'm reading it now. I really enjoyed it and I know you ...

Emma darling, I really liked this! I agree with Nate as he said it sent chills up his spine. I thought you also had an unique style and sense of ...

Jade- I think you have a great book and idea in the making. It just needs a few corrections and plot twists as you said and it'll turn out great. ...

Hey I really enjoyed reading this because you brought something to the table no one else has, well at least on the board, teen suicide. (or at least I think ...

I love your signature and especially this post you've written. I really enjoyed reading it and I could almost feel the girls pain of seeing something no one else can't. ...

Dreamer! Short but sweet! I can't wait to read more of the chapter since I can't really critique on this short post. My favorite line was: He was one of ...

Dreaming Mouse, I've seen pictures of you. You're not fat, you're a healthy looking girl for your size and stature but if you insist on losing weight, instead of going ...

I love my I-Pod too. It's like my life and attached to my body part as someone said! I couldn't leave home without it or go one day without downloading ...

I can't see why you don't like Paris Hilton. How could you not? :) If you don't like her, why do you go to things that will in some way ...

I don't enjoy theatre, but I did like this! I think it was very informative the way you wrote it even though it was written as a story. You described ...

Hey I really enjoyed this. It was a good read since it was written really well. I liked this part the best: This is Sadness At times like this the ...

Hey, I really liked this. Hope to read more because I liked the way you wrote it and your sense of discription, you describe things really well. You're a great ...