Mattie

I love love love this part: your indebted sevenfold, star-crossed, heart-crossed, across a cross and splayed across my heart. I loved how you took a simple word and wrote it ...

Chapter 20: False Exhibitions Matthew wasn’t a bad kisser; he smelt like cologne and he tasted like he had peppermint candy in his mouth. He was sweet, too. She had ...

Personally, I hate "pet names". They annoy me to the fullest extent. Often when I read, I get stuck on that word so I'm like, hating that the writer used ...

Personally, I hate "pet names". They annoy me to the fullest extent. Often when I read, I get stuck on that word so I'm like, hating that the writer used ...

Chapter 19: Unfinished Business Shannon stepped out into the ally that ran between two brick buildings. Renee had followed behind in a steady rhythm while Taylor held tight to her ...

Chapter 18: Moving on Up Renee had invited Shannon over that day after school to pick something out to wear. Her mother had gone grocery shopping and would be home ...

Well, if that's all you got, it would be wise to lengthen it. If it was just practice, then okay. I think you could get even more practice if you ...

Chapter 17: Fast Times Renee sat watching Shannon dance on the floor from the corner booth they shared. Her hips swayed to the music with her eyes closed not caring ...

Chapter 16: Look, but Don’t Touch Shannon had snuck down to the couch from Renee’s room around seven. She didn’t want Mother Superior to come in and find her most ...

What about...Purple Stains on my Collar? Pretty short? If not, I'll just stick with Purple Stains.

How could I shorten it then? Any ideas?

Thanks for the advice, Snoink and Sponson Light. You always have helpful ideas. I think I finally have a good title in mind. It might be a little long, but ...

I was just wanted to know what makes a good title. Is it that it would hold some meaning that later is discovered in the book, something witty that draws ...

Sam told me. Repeatedly. As did J.Wilder. We're the old RK posse...luckily Sam found this place and we were all TAKEN OUT OF OUR MISERY!!!! Did you know that RK ...

Chapter 15: Beauty is in the Eye of the Beholder Shannon couldn’t get to sleep that night. I love her. I love her. The words, even mouthed silently in the ...