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After I read this I had to laugh!!! Hilarious. Made my day :P It's not a poem, but it's really quite funny.

I liked the first few stanzas then you lost me. I honestly don't get what you're trying to say! Sorry :( Curious curious, I am, to know what it could ...

Well, I looked at the photo meant to inspire the stories/poems, and to me, it seems as if you are basically just TELLING the story behind the photo. Actually, you're ...

So my MC's dad is a "hard-working businessman". He goes on a lot of business trips, and takes care of old, ancient books. Basically, for the story, he needs to ...

Great article! I do 'Info Dumps' a lot...I just noticed. Grr! Well this was very helpful, so thanks! :P

I have several questions: #1) Can a story be written in second person, and if so how commonly is it done? Can you give me a sample of a novel ...

Wow, this was thoroughly engrossing. I really got into the story, and you portrayed everything beautifully. It's better written then a lot of published work! Anyway, I agree about the ...

Thanks for posting this!! This will help a ton, and you explained it well, so I could understand everything decently. I just hope I remember this tip... :P

Thanks for the tips, the second when especially, I might have broken.... O.o

Thanks. You're right, once I started it, the pattern just took off, and I only had to tweak it in a few places. :p

I almost always write poetry on paper, and longer works on the computer. It seems to work best that way for me. Of course, I do sometimes write bits or ...

I guessed "school", before looking, since I didn't know this was the last post! Sorry! Here goes: A silver sheen, a mighty reign, a glow. Who knows the lonesome purity ...

I like the original aspect of this very much! It totally makes it shine, when otherwise this theme would bore me. You need to work on your rhyme scheme, as ...

I don't really like this. It's short and abrupt, (the lines) and seems to be just stating obvious, everyday things. Bo-ring! You used no imagery, really, and it didn't really ...

I like this a lot! It's got good imagery, and I really liked the personification of the 'sentient puddle'. In some areas I felt rather confused, and had to re-read ...