Matthews

I really like your style of writing - the voice, the wording...nice! Alone, truely alone Tragically awaiting the nonexistant end 'nonexistent' should be written 'non-existent'. Oh, immortal vexation J

Aw, this is cute! I agree, in a few places the rhyme threw off the flow, but really, it's a very cute, sweet, short and descriptive piece. Nice job.

K, I have to say, I don't really like all. Personal taste perhaps, but it's rather cliche' as there are a MILLION poems very similar to this out there. It's ...

This is super cute! I love it! Before you read this poem, beautiful, I’d like you to say ‘yes’. I thank you very much if you did it, 'I' should ...

He stares at you, Utter hatred in his frozen eyes. His voice, a deathly calm, Comes from hell. It conveys power to hurt, With a single word. Cruelty holds him ...

Whoa! This is really sweet. You do a great job at building up anticipation in a very short, evocative words! I love this! It's short and awesome, and everybody'll love ...

K, the picture is beautiful, and the poem is quite well written. I'll give you a quick review! Translucent web drapes down, haunted with Secrets of distant past. Here the ...

This would probably go in 'narrative poetry' since it tells a story, but it's not a big deal. I lost a lot of blood that night, I lost a lot ...

Do you wanna review this, please? Thanks!

This is really pretty, and something a lot of people can relate to. Everyone knows someone you can 'talk' to without saying anything. The rhyme doesn't seem forced, and I ...

I just wrote this. Tell me what you think! I'm not sure about the flow; it just doesn't seem real smooth yet? Why does time go so fast? Hardly a ...

So how do I delete things I've posted, and no longer want posted? I can't figure out how!

Hmm, this is interesting. I'm not sure what you're talking about but it's rather interesting anyway. Really Old Mislaid The first that fled Right here, you repeat 'fled' immediately after ...

Aw, this is cute. It paints a pretty picture, and reading it is...calming. I like the 2nd stanza best, and personalizing peace was a cool idea. You *could* use more ...

Um, I have to agree...what exactly are you going for with this? It's basically just a random person describing an everyday morning....