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Matthews

  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love Is

    Aw, this is a sweet little poem. It's got a nice message and was an easy, enjoyable read.

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Autumn

    Aw, this is cute and pretty. I like "Autumn is my home" at the end of each stanza. Autumn is my second favorite season, (I love spring). One thing I've ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Harlequin

    Hmm, interesting poem. It could definitely use some work, and all, but the feelings portrayed were something a lot of people can face and feel themselves. We all feel like ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Love's Song

    Oh wow, this is beautiful!!! I LOVE that you use music to compare to love. You've done a wonderful job, and as I am a musician and love music, and ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Toy Soldier

    Nice! It was short, to the point and had a great meaning and great ending. The flow was the main thing that threw me off. It really doesn't flow well ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Sailing into the Sunrise

    I liked the meaning behind this, and it's rather cheery and inspiring. The last stanza is by far my favorite, (which is a good thing - I've noticed a lot ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: If I told you

    For a love poem I liked this. In some areas the flow was a little off, but it was OK. The questions you asked were very real, and something I ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: An Artist and His Brush

    Wow, this is...a gorgeous and wonderful poem! I'm in love with it!!! You've done an AMAZING job!I don't have much to say other then complimenting it. It's got great imagery, ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: a leaf's life and yours

    First off, I like the...leafy topic, and it was written nicely enough. You definitely need to put this into stanzas, or lines or something to make it easier to read, ...

    Jun 10, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: Rosebud

    Not exactly sure what this is supposed to mean? Who is the 'rose' supposed to be? I liked the imagery and the way it was written, although it was a ...

    Jun 8, 2011
  • Lyric Poetry Re: A rose for you, my darling

    I liked it, and I enjoyed the repeat of 'A rose for you, my darling' at the beginning of each stanza. It's rather a cliche' piece, but I didn't mind ...

    Jun 5, 2011
  • Writing Tips Re: Find Out What Grade Level You Write At

    I got... Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 12 Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 37 But what exactly do these 'levels' and 'scores' mean???

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Narrative Poetry Re: God's Creation

    READ SPOILER: I am a Christian, and believe everything I have written. A lot was inspired by the beginning of Genesis. I just love to think of God's amazing creation, ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: A loss so great, it makes thunder cry out

    K, first off this could be quite a powerful poem, that a lot of people can relate to. Your grammar and punctuation (or lack there of!) is rather irritating, and ...

    Jun 2, 2011
  • Dramatic Poetry Re: The Real Show

    Not exactly sure what this is supposed to mean... And I agree, you could use a bit more punctuation. Also, near the end, you repeat 'ground' three times. A bit ...

    Jun 2, 2011


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