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Re: Love Is
Aw, this is a sweet little poem. It's got a nice message and was an easy, enjoyable read.
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Autumn
Aw, this is cute and pretty. I like "Autumn is my home" at the end of each stanza. Autumn is my second favorite season, (I love spring). One thing I've ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Harlequin
Hmm, interesting poem. It could definitely use some work, and all, but the feelings portrayed were something a lot of people can face and feel themselves. We all feel like ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Love's Song
Oh wow, this is beautiful!!! I LOVE that you use music to compare to love. You've done a wonderful job, and as I am a musician and love music, and ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Toy Soldier
Nice! It was short, to the point and had a great meaning and great ending. The flow was the main thing that threw me off. It really doesn't flow well ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Sailing into the Sunrise
I liked the meaning behind this, and it's rather cheery and inspiring. The last stanza is by far my favorite, (which is a good thing - I've noticed a lot ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: If I told you
For a love poem I liked this. In some areas the flow was a little off, but it was OK. The questions you asked were very real, and something I ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: An Artist and His Brush
Wow, this is...a gorgeous and wonderful poem! I'm in love with it!!! You've done an AMAZING job!I don't have much to say other then complimenting it. It's got great imagery, ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: a leaf's life and yours
First off, I like the...leafy topic, and it was written nicely enough. You definitely need to put this into stanzas, or lines or something to make it easier to read, ...
Jun 10, 2011 -
Re: Rosebud
Not exactly sure what this is supposed to mean? Who is the 'rose' supposed to be? I liked the imagery and the way it was written, although it was a ...
Jun 8, 2011 -
Re: A rose for you, my darling
I liked it, and I enjoyed the repeat of 'A rose for you, my darling' at the beginning of each stanza. It's rather a cliche' piece, but I didn't mind ...
Jun 5, 2011 -
Re: Find Out What Grade Level You Write At
I got... Flesch-Kincaid Grade level: 12 Flesch-Kincaid Reading Ease score: 37 But what exactly do these 'levels' and 'scores' mean???
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: God's Creation
READ SPOILER: I am a Christian, and believe everything I have written. A lot was inspired by the beginning of Genesis. I just love to think of God's amazing creation, ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: A loss so great, it makes thunder cry out
K, first off this could be quite a powerful poem, that a lot of people can relate to. Your grammar and punctuation (or lack there of!) is rather irritating, and ...
Jun 2, 2011 -
Re: The Real Show
Not exactly sure what this is supposed to mean... And I agree, you could use a bit more punctuation. Also, near the end, you repeat 'ground' three times. A bit ...
Jun 2, 2011
