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It's natural to me.

This is so darn....CUTE!!! I gotta agree with TheScratchMan. You just make that bee sound adorable. I was grinning while reading this and I didn't spot any errors. Such a ...

Wow I love this. This is adorable, fun, and just a really overall enjoyable read! Great job!! The rhyme and rhythm is fantastic, and it flows along wonderfully. One TINY ...

The cool wind blows my hair in front of my eyes , but I pay no regard . W e had walked here multiple times ; Y our cheery eyes ...

Pull out this glossy amber bench, Sitting upon its ornate beauty I’m sitting on top of the world. Push back the cover, so familiar, Feel an adrenaline rush. I’m revealing ...

This is amazing, the story is SO original and I love the idea. I used to have an imaginary friend myself. Homeschooled kids have friends FYI, so that sorta made ...

Well, this is a nice emotional piece, but it's not something most people are going to enjoy reading. (No, I'm not talking about the rhyming and structure.) As you said ...

A serious topic presented in a light-hearted way...well, you did a good job on it, but I still feel a bit depressed, since this is very true. I hear my ...

Aw, this is a beautiful narrative. Oh. On that topic, I think it'd go into Narrative Poetry, but it doesn't really matter. You say you wanted to write something 'not ...

I immediately clicked on this, being an avid pianist myself...anywho, it's very sweet and cute, but I think you could expand the idea. When I was young I used to ...

I love the vibrant words you used to really paint in my mind, but while I read this, I felt out of breath. There was no place to stop; to ...

This is awesome! As Daisuki said, the personification was excellent! It's clean and tidy on grammar, punctuation, has great flow and rhyme. Nice, nice.

Wow, nice job! You took a rather cliche topic and twisted it into something original and interesting. Good job on that! That distance they talked about, Who's the 'they'? Wouldn't ...

This was interesting, and quite well written. I think you should arrange the stanzas into some sort of form, as it looks a little messy and the stanzas seem random ...

Agreed. Just a list of words. You could make this into something, but right now...eh.