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I also agree it could do with being a shortened post...however I LOVED THIS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like it, though I'm not sure how it'll sound as an actual song, ya know? Sounds like it might be better as a poem or something; shorter, but with ...

Well, I haven't sung this so I'm not sure how it'll actually sound. I have to write the music for it next...big job! These are the first song lyrics I've ...

Wow, intense story! I like it! The ending totally confused me, so maybe elaborate a bit more...

I’m falling from the height of life; I’m drowning in this world alone; oh so alone now. And even while surrounded by friends, I somehow feel deserted, as if I ...

I liked it, but there were some places with commas unneeded. "So leave me broken-- to disappear, into dust." Maybe "So leave me broken, to disappear into dust." would be ...

This is gonna give me NIGHTMARES!!!!!!!!!!!!! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! Demented, and TOTALLY creepy! How did you even manage to think up something like this?

If I try to post something it says I can't because I don't have enough "points"? Why is that, and how do I get more points?

I'm Lydia Matthews, live in Kiel, WI on a farm and own two beautiful horses who are a huge part of my life. Their names are Minuet and Psyche, and ...

I thought it was VERY well written, but I don't like all the swearing. I can see you want to express who "Ross" really is, but I feel it's unnecessary ...

As others have said it varies a LOT on where they are supposed to be from in America, but here's for where I am: Something amazing: Awesome, sweet, totally rad, ...

Romance. Weddings. Kissing. Mostly two people on a date chatting and relaxing I guess.

Haha I love it!!! Totally awesome! Maybe at the end instead of "This love is not to be" change to "This love may never be" "May" gives it it's not ...

Ooh, can't wait for the next chapter! Want to find out what happens!

Ooh, I really liked it! Catchy, yet easy to understand. Fun, but not boring.