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Re: The Fish and His Roommate
Wow, this was awesome! Really original and creative. There was one thing I didn't like, however: With that said, the fish and the philosopher became roommates. It was a little ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: My Miracle.
Don't stop writing!!! This has potential, but as the others have said, it is way too rushed. I'm like confuseled! lol! ;) I would love to read the rest of ...
Jan 27, 2011 -
Re: An Ode to Google
This is awesome! I agree that some of the rhyming seemed forced, but overall, it was funny and true :) Very enjoyable read.
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: halloween contest entry, the underground city
Holy crap this was freaky! It was like part of a movie I watched (can't remember the name) where they had clones and lied to them about the rest of ...
Jan 26, 2011 -
Re: White Ravens
Wow, this was so...readable! I really liked it. It was awesome! There was one thing I didn't like but now I can't remember what it is! lol...guess it mustn't have ...
Jan 25, 2011 -
Re: A Blade
I didn't feel like reading everybody's reviews, so I might repeat something already said: I like the excitement and action, but right now it's rather emotionless and "Oh another spy/assassin ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: A Serious Game of Hide and Seek
I hurried to pull on some black jeans and a dark sweater. Alan was waiting for me impatiently, and I had to move quickly. Adrenaline flowed through me as I ...
Jan 24, 2011 -
Re: Foretold (Prolouge +Chapter 1)
Well, since the previous reviewers covered most of the questions, I'll just say I agree with them. There are a lot of "whys" in this story. I can understand that ...
Nov 11, 2010 -
Re: New Name
Thanks for the comments. tuckerluvr, I DID describe, actually. Big, black stallion are used. I wrote sleek stallion PRANCING in his stall....I guess you mustn't have caught that. Anyway, I ...
Nov 9, 2010 -
Re: New Name
“Wynne, come here!” Shouted Larkspur. “What is it?” Asked Wynne as she left her studies to join her younger sister at their mansions living room windows. “Father has arrived, and ...
Nov 8, 2010 -
Re: White Eyes (part nine)
Hey, thanks for letting me know the new section was out. :D Catching the look on Morgan’s face, the stern look in his eyes softened. Bending slightly, he placed his ...
Nov 5, 2010 -
Re: Line design and words!
Sweet! I like muchly.
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: About the best I could EVER do.
I LOVE these photos! I love the one of the grain bin and pine tree. Totally cool. You must have a nice camera, what kind is it???
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: My abstract pattern thinger!
Ooh, I like this! Part of my says it's "boring" because it's just a random abstract pattern, but then another part of me is like "nice, it's colorful and exciting!" ...
Oct 31, 2010 -
Re: White Eyes (part eight)
Wow, this has got to be one of your best chapters yet! Great job! The first sentance was a little confusing, as baywolf25 mentioned, but other then that...awesome job! :P
Oct 30, 2010
