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Hmm, I didn't really like it. I was wavering liking it or not liking it, but the last line decided in favor of the latter.

Wow, I really liked this! It was amazingly done, and agreed, the twist at the end was surprising. Awesome job.

I liked this...alot. For me, it's a message many young people should read today. They don't realize what a gift purity is. The last bit, somehow threw me off the ...

This was nice I liked the second line the best. The last, I agree, seemed a bit rushed, but it was a beautiful piece.

I wrote this last night on a sudden whim. I kind of just decided to stop, but I could ad more lines if I want, what do you think? Oh, ...

Haha I liked this, and I LOVED that it is actually about a boulder!!! This line kinda threw me the "P word" supposed to be pain? It was probably just ...

I like this, but I agree with LilySoulMahon that if it were lengthened and you added more imagery it would be even better. I realize you just randomly put this ...

Wow, this was very emotional and powerful! Great job! That's all part of the art; taking something that happens in life, and exaggerating it and making it something big. Even ...

I like the message it conveys, but I agree it has little imagery, and seems rather forced. In the first two stanzas you overuse the word "finally" it is used ...

I really liked this, it's true, emotional, and well written. It seemed to me that you have interesting breaks in the stanzas, like here: She asks if I'm all right. ...

I randomly wrote this one night out of boredom. I don't know if it is considered poetry or not. I don't know what it's considered, actually!!! Pearls glisten, and viewers ...

Ooh, I liked this! It was great :) And so true.

Thanks for the review! I can see how that first pointer could be confusing...I'll have to see what I can do about that. I knew I should have done something ...

This was really cool. I enjoyed this quite a lot. Keep writing!

Hahah this was actually really funny! Much better then anything I could have written at 10. Slipping on the banana peel totally made me crack up!!!! :D Overall, I like ...