Matthews

I like it. The way you have the line breaks throws me off somewhat while reading it, but as it is meant to be a song, it doesn't matter. Only ...

I loved this, I really did. It was pretty darn awesome :) Couple suggestions: It's a concrete paved out world out there, Scrap metal danglen' though the air. Maybe it ...

Angry shouts and scorching flame I really like this stanza. I think it has to be my favorite out of the whole poem! Pounding feet and steely fangs My bloody ...

It felt too long...more of a story than anything. In fact, if you took this theme and made a short story out of it would probably be more readable, not ...

I think reading this damaged my brain. In fact, I'm positive I'll never be quite the same after such an...interesting experience!!! lol jk, but seriously, I didn't get this at ...

Actually I rarely write rhyming poetry. I find it harder and less enjoyable, but I wanted to become better at it, so I've started playing around with it a bit ...

I didn't really get the meaning of this, and usually that's not the case. For then true beauty would be found, which is something saved for the divine, we'd gaze ...

Ooh I loved this!!! It's awesome! I love the meaning behind it and the rhyming was good except in one small place hardly mentionable. :) I forget about the present. ...

Hmm, I liked this, but the repeats of certain phrases bothered me: Faceless. Faceless. Here for example. The repeats seem unnecessary and draw me away from the main point. I ...

This isn't fiction...this is a true story, and I am the main character, Lydia. This is what happened (with a little exaggeration and added imagination, of course!) so I couldn't ...

I JUST wrote this. It took like 10 minutes, and I didn't really edit so please feel to pick it apart. Forgotten Hope: A dagger pierces, a shout echoes. Clinging ...

Haha I liked it! :)

Ooh, I like muchly ;) It was pretty sweet !

Lydia C. M. Wisconsin.

Start out with a small idea and grow on it. You can write a poem about a snowflake, a pebble, a feather - you just need to focus and build ...