Matthews

A sob, a sigh, No kiss goodbye. You left me alone In this world to die. I pled for nothing, you still departed; Left me behind to mourn and cry. ...

This is something I did for my Creative Writing class. I don't have to continue it, but surprisingly, I like it quite a bit, so maybe I will just for ...

Just a few suggestions: I call, I scream, I shout a name. But who can I trust, just who can I blame? Take out "just" My burden so heavy, my ...

I liked this, it wasn't boring to read, which I often find in this sort of poem. The repeats of "Don't you love?" got kinda tiring, to me, so you ...

K, I'll have to see about adding some subtle signs...Thanks for the reviews!

Ooh I loved this just as much as the first chapter! It's getting deeper and more intense! You had a LOT of punctuation and capitalization missing. NOT cool. It would ...

Aw, how cute! Very sweet!

I like the last one best. My aunt lives in Idaho as do my lil' cousins, but I've never been there...wish I could've been.

Wow, this totally gripped me! I noticed some grammatical errors, but as previous reviewers pointed those out I won't take the time. I really really LOVE this! I love the ...

These are cute! My favorites are #5 and the last one.

These are awesome! My favorite was #3 I think...although they were all really cool. :)

Haha! You're right! Well, I thought using "broken" sounded really obvious and kinda boring, so "soiled" was a little more creative, but I still hadn't decided for sure. Actually, I'm ...

Hmm, I agree this needs work, it's just a bunch of interesting questions right now. Not terrible, but not overly exciting or enjoyable to read...Work on imagery and add some ...

Haha nice idea! I like it, except for the cursing, which I'm never a fan of. But it's your poem. Creative and original! :P

Wow, I liked this! Great job!