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Cute poem :) I enjoyed this, and I think you did a good job with the short length and it's just really a sensory piece. Great emotion and ends on ...

Hmm, I hate to feel like the bad guy here, but personally while I read this it felt almost like one big run-on. I couldn't take a breath to stop ...

Pretty good poem here! I enjoyed reading it, and the story was interesting and something a lot of people can relate to. Not necessarily 'moving schools' but leaving things behind, ...

Interesting poem. I personally don't believe in the concept of 'Mother Nature', but this was still a good poem that I could enjoy. Once, I ruled the oceans, You do ...

You kneel on the floor , tear s falling from your eyes. It's 'tears' otherwise it would become 'tear is', just like 'it's' becomes 'it is', and 'tear is' makes ...

OK, to me, it seems cute, and I like that it's short and tidy, and all, but what is the BASIS of it? What ARE you if you're not ordinary? ...

Sydney She is a beautiful sunrise at the start of a great day, This beginning is rather cliche' and put me off the poem somewhat. It didn't bother me too ...

Wow, very emotional, strong piece! I don't have much to say other then that - it looks good in all areas and is a very deep poem.

Hmm, interesting work. Rather bone-chilling, I must confess, so kudos on that! I like the narrator's tone and voice, and overall is, as I said, a thought-provoking piece. I cut ...

Awesome job! I really enjoyed this. Sorry I don't have anything productive to comment on!

Wow, this is a beautiful piece! I love the fantastic imagery, wording, thoughtfulness....it's just perfect!

So I have to take this AWFUL class over summer and it's...yeah, you guessed it! Algebra. My favorite. So anywho, this was inspired as I sat a moment ago rotting ...

This was very emotional and thought-provoking. The really sad thing is, often times it's so true. I didn't notice any errors. I liked how even though this theme has been ...

Whoa, I love this!!! It's beautifully done, and I love the wording and imagery. GREAT job! It really drew me in, and I think it flowed well throughout. I just ...

This is really pretty and sweet. It was a nice length, flowed along, and had a beautiful story. I enjoyed reading it, and it kept my attention wonderfully. My only ...