Matthews

I like this one a lot! It's amusing, light and you have good imagery. I lie there each morning, innocently sleeping, when my silence is ruptured, by a horrible beeping. ...

An ancient piano rests silently in its forgotten memory. The room deserted for decades. Pale sunlight struggles to glimmer through the grim-coated windows. Those tall, elegant windows, once so beautif

I like the message a lot, I really do. It wasn't exactly what I thought someone would you to portray that, but it was kind of refreshing because of that. ...

Not bad. Not my favorite, (personal taste) but it's OK. He looked out at the beach, she sat safely within his reach. He spoke to the three, who gazed smiling ...

K, good job a creating an interesting image in my mind. It's quite beautiful really, but what bugged me was you going in and out of past and present tense. ...

Wow, very emotional, brought a tear to my eye! Great job on portraying the emotion so the reader feels it.

Adam kinda covered what I was gonna say. I don't get the poem, yet it's interesting and neat in a storybook kind of way. I lost interest through-out as it ...

I love this! Nothing to nit-pick! It was humorous and light. A very enjoyable read. :)

K, first off, I liked the originality aspect of it. Interesting, yet not too interesting, (as in boring, interesting, lol) I have a couple issues with this, though. You use ...

Wow, very dark and very expressive for such a short piece! Bravo! The rhyming did not seem forced, very natural and easy to read, however, you have quite a lot ...

First off, I can tell this is an interesting piece. You have a lot of emotion in here, but I kept getting the feeling that you're not displaying it in ...

First off, the rhyming is throwing me off. It seems very forced an unnatural making it hard to read. It is an interesting piece, and overall I liked it, but ...

Can you review "A Sickened Mind"? I have reviews, but I edited it alot, so if you could, that'd be sweet. Thanks!

Hey, could you review this: I have a lot more written, I just haven't posted it yet...I'd appreciate it TONS if you could review! :) Thanks SO much!

Uh, defence with a "c" isn't even correct. The correct spelling is with an "s"!! Besides it looks retarded with a c....Defense...ah, much better.