Matthews

Well, you already have a bunch of reviews/comments, but I feel like giving you a review anyway! :P I really enjoyed this poem. It was quite fascinating, and I loved ...

I liked this! I am not sure if it was meant to be humorous, but especially this stanza... Why! My skin is of the finest silk, The softest in the ...

READ SPOILER: I wrote this for a class assignment and it was meant to be in 'ode style' so I'm guessing some of the rhymes might be a bit forced, ...

You painted a very vivid picture, so good job. It was short and sweet and clear. I quite enjoyed it. :P

What?! You...murdered Morgan? Gasp! I have to say though, I was immensely surprised by this. I have to agree with borntobeawriter that I feel skipped out of a great story. ...

Wow, I really really love this! It's very description, has great imagery and paints a cute picture of childhood bliss. I think you should divide this into paragraphs or stanzas, ...

I liked this quite a bit. I'd like to first point out that you have an irregular pattern however. The first two stanzas match in length, and then suddenly it's ...

I had this as a creative writing assignment, and liked it. I had to follow these rules: · Quatrain stanzas · 1st and 3rd lines are in iambic tetrameter (eight ...

I like this. You use a lot of imagery and it paints a pretty picture. Quite nice. Standing lonesome, silent, on the dusty windowsill, In tarnished silver, brilliant and white, ...

EDITED: Loyal stars dive in the sky, obeying their master. A proud moon shines elegantly above his subjects. The grass whispers a ballet among its roots as it feels the ...

Wow, this gave me the chills! Amazing. I agree, it was like black silk! There really isn't anything helpful I feel I can say. The rhyme was good; didn't seem ...

Wow, I love this. I really do. I don't even know why I like it so much, but I literally, *literally* couldn't stop reading. Anyhow, I agree that the huge ...

I stare at my older sister, Lina. Her black tank top's folded up to reveal from her ribs down and it looks disgusting. And I mean like, Jimmy eating a ...

Rascalover pointed out some of the things I saw, but I'll give this a review anyhow. This caught my interest, which is good, because this isn't the kind of thing ...

I agree with IcyFlame. This looks interesting, but the bad punctuation and the way it was written really threw me off and CONFUSED me. I get that a terrible rain ...