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Hmm, I like this...it's very fun to read, and gives a good view into what it's like going to homecoming or prom. It was neat. I actually don't know why ...

Hmm, this was very beautiful...and I enjoyed it. The only thing that bugged me was the rhyme scheme, as it often seemed forced, and half the time you don't rhyme. ...

I posted this in "other" because I don't plan on continuing it...I actually dug it up from a while ago, and reading it gave me a feeling of dread and ...

Wow, this is very beautifully written! I'm impressed. It has a wonderful flow, had a lot of emotion, and was really touching. There are a few places where the punctuation ...

I wrote this one first, then edited it: Snow White looked out her window one day, And to her complete surprise, Prince Charming was there. They spent days, weeks, months ...

Wow. This is beautiful!!! It's very well-written, easy to read, and grabs the reader's attention with the wonderful wording. It's very true - the message, and applies to a lot ...

Wow, this was very beautiful and sweet. So cute! Not sure if that's how you wanted it to come off as, I was thinking "Aww," and it's truth too...although I ...

This was very beautiful, and I liked it a lot. :) I don't really have anything constructive to say, so will just say, you did a great job!

This was very good, and I enjoyed it. I have a couple nitpics though: 1) The huge gaps between every single line really annoyed me and threw me off. There ...

This was a very powerful and emotional poem, but you need to clean it up a bit. First off, the title is crappy...try to think of something that will 'interest' ...

As far as love poems go, this one I quite liked. It was, as others said, very emotional and thought-provoking. Nice job!

Prologue: Every little girl has dreamt of being a beautiful, kind princess, and those of the more tomboyish disposition from early on – dreamt instead of being a handsome, brave ...

Definitely an interesting poem. I agree that it felt drawn-out, and you can't help getting bored reading through it. It's very repetitious and any excitement and pity soon die out ...

Once, I ruled the oceans, And held the sky in my palm. Once, I kept the earth for me, and willed the fire calm. The animals obayed me, Each and ...

This is quite beautiful, and intriguing, although I found the meaning somewhat vague. I enjoyed it nonetheless, and will give you a quick review: First off, you should probably capitalize ...