MatthewDawn

Thank you for the comments everyone! I updated the original post with a version 2. And Cspr, I was not trying to say all Christians are like this. I fixed ...

This was very well written, yes, we can feel his pain. The descriptions give a clear detail of what is happening in the scene, however disturbing it may be. Reading ...

This story is amazingly written, I love it! Amazing job! Although, one part I wasn't fond of was that it sped up a little closer to the end, at the ...