MatthewDawn

Thank you for the comments everyone! I updated the original post with a version 2. And Cspr, I was not trying to say all Christians are like this. I fixed ...

This is the most insulting thing I have ever read. You're whole argument is flawed from the very beginning. This is sexist and immature on so many levels. 10. All ...

This was very well written, yes, we can feel his pain. The descriptions give a clear detail of what is happening in the scene, however disturbing it may be. Reading ...

This is a pretty nice list, interesting. However, it seems as if you're just listing things (actually, that's exactly what you did). Having a list isn't bad, however you need ...

This is a very well written story, nice job! It is explained beautifully, with detail, and is fun to read. However, there is one major problem. I don't feel there's ...

This story is amazingly written, I love it! Amazing job! Although, one part I wasn't fond of was that it sped up a little closer to the end, at the ...

As I strolled into the empty classroom I glanced at the clock. Class was due to start in less than a minute but I was the first one to arrive. ...