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Re: Breakfast
A good poem. Descriptive with good vocab but not too complicated. I like that. I think you've done a pretty good job and it flows perfectly. I like the subject ...
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Re: This site is pretty intimidating. Gahhh.
If you have writers block, the best thing for it I think is to plug in your headphones and listen to music .Only your favourite songs. Trust me it helps. ...
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Re: Of Light and Of Life
Wow a beautiful poem . The concept was brilliant but the last stanza was your weakest. Overall a good job
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Re: does anyone know how i could change my username
im trying to change my username and i dont know how to do it. anyone know how i could?
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Re: Abducted
Thanks , Ill try and work on the grammar. :)
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Re: Final Lullaby
A sad poem but very nice. Structured well with great vocabulary , your very good! kind of poem that sticks on your mind. :D
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Re: Get Off My Wall
A good poem. Made me laugh. I thought it had good structure and it was very sweet.A bit odd, what made you write about a cockroach?
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Re: Monster Love
Thankyou.Its much appreciated
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Re: Stephen King legendary writer?
reading the stephen king novel Rose Madder. amazing talent Carrie Salems Lot Cujo Anyone got any other favourite stephen king books? :twisted:
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Re: hi is anyone online? im new
hi if theres anyone online, could they review my stuff?ill review anyone elses
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Re: No Money, No Honey
Thought it was a great poem, very narcisistic but in an empowering kind of way. Love the way she rejects him but very superficial aswell. Overall a great poem , ...
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Re: Great tip for writing
When I have writers block or if i need some inspiration. I listen to music , usually synthpop and 80's synth music. Ill think of something to write about in ...
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Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)
Hi will you review a poem of mine its called Monster Love. Im eager to see what others think of it. if you can id be grateful.
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Re: Who am I?
Hi! Thanks for your review, im going to try and review yours. I think whats great about the poem is its simplicity . its short and sweet and gets the ...
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Re: Divine Beauty
Your a great poet, and i like your writing style. I particularly like the lines "beauty is divine , beauty can reflect", there is a holistic sound to this that ...
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