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MattJF

  • Dramatic Poetry Re: Breakfast

    A good poem. Descriptive with good vocab but not too complicated. I like that. I think you've done a pretty good job and it flows perfectly. I like the subject ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: This site is pretty intimidating. Gahhh.

    If you have writers block, the best thing for it I think is to plug in your headphones and listen to music .Only your favourite songs. Trust me it helps. ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Of Light and Of Life

    Wow a beautiful poem . The concept was brilliant but the last stanza was your weakest. Overall a good job

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: does anyone know how i could change my username

    im trying to change my username and i dont know how to do it. anyone know how i could?

    Jan 24, 2010
  • General Fiction Short Stories Re: Abducted

    Thanks , Ill try and work on the grammar. :)

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Final Lullaby

    A sad poem but very nice. Structured well with great vocabulary , your very good! kind of poem that sticks on your mind. :D

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Get Off My Wall

    A good poem. Made me laugh. I thought it had good structure and it was very sweet.A bit odd, what made you write about a cockroach?

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Monster Love

    Thankyou.Its much appreciated

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: Stephen King legendary writer?

    reading the stephen king novel Rose Madder. amazing talent Carrie Salems Lot Cujo Anyone got any other favourite stephen king books? :twisted:

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Lounge, The Re: hi is anyone online? im new

    hi if theres anyone online, could they review my stuff?ill review anyone elses

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: No Money, No Honey

    Thought it was a great poem, very narcisistic but in an empowering kind of way. Love the way she rejects him but very superficial aswell. Overall a great poem , ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Welcome Mat Re: Great tip for writing

    When I have writers block or if i need some inspiration. I listen to music , usually synthpop and 80's synth music. Ill think of something to write about in ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • WRFF Archive Re: Reviews from a Marine (Re-opened)

    Hi will you review a poem of mine its called Monster Love. Im eager to see what others think of it. if you can id be grateful.

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Who am I?

    Hi! Thanks for your review, im going to try and review yours. I think whats great about the poem is its simplicity . its short and sweet and gets the ...

    Jan 24, 2010
  • Lyric Poetry Re: Divine Beauty

    Your a great poet, and i like your writing style. I particularly like the lines "beauty is divine , beauty can reflect", there is a holistic sound to this that ...

    Jan 24, 2010


Follow your inner moonlight; don't hide the madness
— Allen Ginsburg