MattJF

thanks for the tips! :D

No. What your supposed to do is. First of all listento your music. Then while you do think about the sound, the instruents how it makes you feel.afterwards pick up ...

RSVP!!!! :twisted:

Comments on board and thanks for the tip. But this is not a love poem its an anti-love poem for the cynical minded.

Love is a knife straight through your heart. God I've never felt so much pain! Love is a drug. I'm a drug addict, Soon I'm gonna need that high again. ...

I loved your poem but my favourite line was this: "Darkened clouds, wind and rain.Left alone with all this pain. It’s winter here without you". I loved how you compared ...

I thought that your poem was amazing probably the best one I have read so far on this forum tonight. It was so sad and I agree with Moriah Leila ...

Good use of vocabulary and you've obviously taken time on it. But I have to agree with Velvet whispers and sae, I have not got a clue what this is ...

I think you've done an excellent job, considering you wrote this in math class which has got to be the most mind-numbing subject on Earth. my favourite line has got ...

Cool. I love your writing style. I can tell the meaning behind your poem, and it is powerful. What I admire and enjoy the most about your work is your ...

Wow! Your poetry puts mine to shame. Makes this winter seem more endurable. You would be crazy to change your poem it looks fantastic as it is! Well done! :elephant:

Grave is a poem ultimately about death and liberation through rebirth, and how someone you love can make you feel "dead" is also about the feeling of suffocation in a ...

This poem is for my good friends, Liam, Jamie and Jamal. Trapped in this box, I need to leave. Your all over me , I can hardly breathe. I used ...

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Thankyou for the tips, I will pm you if I need anymore help. I do not want it to sound vampire because I was trying to convey the situation in ...