MattJF

I was lying down in the rain. In the middle of a busy street. Water filled my eyes and ears making passersby look like flitting shadows. They stopped and stared ...

Sick obsession I stumble blindly through your smoky love. I can never find my way. As everything we know falls apart I find I have nothing left to say. I ...

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Hi Strangegirl I love haiku's, and your poem reminded me why. You created a beautiful picture using such a simple method of writing. I imagined the snow falling in my ...

Hi fiction903 I thought that your poem was really good. The imagry was great and so was the language and fluidity. Very few writers have good fluidity when writing poems. ...

Hi StoicTraveler Your poemwas very inspiring. It makes you think about the bigger questions and also makes the reader answer questions about yourself. I think that you are a very ...

This isn't like my usual style. As I don't normally write this kind of poetry. It just felt right to write this now. Feel free to leave any comments.

So I'm making up for lost time and erasing all of the mistakes. These final hours would pass so easily if I pretend... That you really, truly loved me and ...

Cool poem. The imagry and language you have used goes really well with what your writing about. This was good. Write more!!

Thank you everyone who took the time to comment or review my poem. To answer fiction903's question. It means that people can tell you beautiful things but they could mean ...

I don't like your psychology, messing around with my head. Listen when he tells you, you should never wake the dead. Don’t you see? Your diamond words sound just so ...

Wow. What an emotional poem. It really engages the reader and you really tackled the subject well. Sorry if this is written from personal experience. It is very powerful and ...

David Bowie and Prince, (who are two of my ultimate idols) wrote about fashion and so I thought it was about time I picked up my pen and did the ...

This is for a good friend of mine who asked me to write this. I hope you enjoy it. I am what you want to be Looking sharp is so ...

Hi Percy Your poem is awesome. The reason I say this is because your making a statement, and I believe in what your saying.Other than the line repetition at the ...