MattJF

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I for one would like to say I thought your poem was great. To tackle such an issue is brave and you seem to have succeeded here. Although I would ...

Hi. Just wanted to say I loved your poem. I haven't got time to review it fully but I just wanted to say that it reminded of one of my ...

I agree with the others, in that this could be a song. If your not a musician I would find a friend who is and maybe work with them. I ...

I have to say I didn't like this poem. I like the story. It is just that you have chosen to tell it in a shabby way. You haven't taken ...

An interesting subject to cover. The selfishness of human nature and also the need for comfort and love. These are tough subjects which I think you have tackled fairly well. ...

I love Haiku's but I can never write them. You clearly can. I loved every single word. The vision was fantastic. In Haiku's you have to use every word to ...

Hi Conrad. Your poem was actually really good. I love your language and the way you used it to execute your vision. I do agree with Rosey when she said ...

My own spin on the Bonnie and Clyde story. Even though they committed terrible crimes, they loved each other so much it looked obsessive. They would literally die for each ...

Crazy in love (Bonnie's story) By M.J. Fitzsimmons Its time you learned, the tables have turned, I’m not in control anymore. But I’m in this for life. Look what we’ve ...

Harsh lol.

Thankyou. Im glad you could relate.

Thankyou for your advice, and for taking the time to review. I appreciate it.

Your poem is awesome. You share my passion for music. I could relate to every line. Sometimes music is the only escape. Its like a refuge you captured perfectly in ...

Thankyou. I write everything from personal experience. I'm so glad you liked it!