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MattJF

  • Other Poetry Re: Dirty Fashion

    David Bowie is my ultimate idol. I love the song fashion. You've hit the nail on the head. Its based on previous relationship of mine where I knew that my ...

    Feb 28, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Gone without me

    Thankyou. I will go over that last stanza. I'm so happy you liked it! Thanks snufalumpapaumpkins lol :)

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Gone without me

    Thank you Kammas. Duly noted. Sorry I just always try to comment on where the poem came from and what inspired me. But thanks anyway. I'm really grateful!

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Gone without me

    Thankyou!! I'm so happy that you felt that way. I can totally empathise with you. Thankyou for reviewing my work!

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Gone without me

    This is about losing someone you love dearly and is also about my fear of loss. Please review and tell me what you think!

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Gone without me

    I saw them staring right at you the other day. Feeling so naked, I watched you look away. Don't believe what they say. I will love you anyway. I need ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Lyrics Re: Realize

    I've decided to venture into lyrics to see what all the fuss is about. I loved this. I write lyric poetry and I'm trying to turn my work into songs, ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: I am Jane Doe

    I really liked this poem and I agree with Story weaver in that you have obviously put a lot of thought into writing this. All in all not a bad ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: trans-neptunian

    I hate to sound horrible, but I just was not into this poem. If you can call it that. It was too hard to follow and although I liked your ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Haiku (English Assignment)

    I think they are all pretty brilliant. My favorite is 2,7 and 9. I can't pick out of them. My only advice to you is to randomly pick a number ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Ode to Kamas

    Aww thats so sweet. I'm sure you have made Kammas's day. I think only Kammas has the right to review this. Well done lol.

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Omnipotenti

    Ooh, I liked this. Very haunting and it stuck in my mind. I agree with the previous comment in that it sounds like something an old wizard would say. It ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: 17

    I loved it. The fast face of it. The flow was great. Perfectly describing teenage lust. Your obviously very talented. What inspired you to write this poem. It immediately caught ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Moments

    The perfect word to describe this was enchanting. It really was. You drew me in and the language was beautiful. I read it twice! What inspired yo to write this? ...

    Feb 22, 2010
  • Other Poetry Re: Alice In Wonderland

    The title immediately caught my eye. I can't wait for the new Tim Burton movie. I liked your poem but the rhyming was really off. I would go over that. ...

    Feb 22, 2010


Keep your face to the sunshine and you cannot see a shadow.
— Helen Keller