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Re: Two Gay Poems
Loved it. I admire and tip my hat to you. For standing up for what is right and for posting this. I am not gay either but I oppose all ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Teenage Torment
Thankyou for your comments they were amazing and for taking the time for comment on my work. Like I said to the previous comments I'll keep on writing as long ...
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Coffee (a haiku)
I think I'm gonna go make some coffee now! :D
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Mr. November
I empathise completely. The way I see it is this. All the heartbreak can't be for nothing or I will go crazy. So every experience good or bad, I write, ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Weirdness is good!!
Hi YWS! My name is Matt and I'm a writer. My goal in life is to be a famous novelist, musician and songwriter. It all started for me when I ...
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: My Alice
I don't think it matters what "Alice" this is based on. I think your trying to sort of giving Alice a reality check. Life isn't all fairy tales and tea ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Monster Love
I was surprised to see that someone had reviewed this! It was the first poem I ever wrote. Its kind of a monster metaphor, because we have all been in ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Fear the truth
Your very kind. My poetry is so not amazing but thankyou for the amazing compliment. Its okay, I deal with my problems by writing them down, which is why I ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Teenage Torment
Ha ha your my new best friend! Thankyou for your comments, Its people like you I write for. Thankyou for taking time to read my poems, it really means alot!
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: When you were almost mine...
I loved this poem. I related to it completely. Ha ha even down to the eye colour! I look forward to seeing more of your poetry. I thought it was ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Fear the truth
Its about Unrequited love. Or loving someone who has no idea that you do, your just to scared to confront them about it, and sadly :( I write everything from ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Teenage Torment
Thankyou fiction903. I'm happy you like the poem. And thanks for your tip. And thanks for taking the time to review it means alot
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Teenage Torment
Teenage Torment It was the first day of my springtime. It felt like winter, a thousand frozen smiles. I looked for rainbows in the moonlight. But the moonlight blinds naive ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Fear the truth
Fear the truth A feeling in my chest, I do not know its name, Just going through the motions that are filling up my brain. Conflicting emotions, they tear me ...
Mar 7, 2010 -
Re: Dirty Fashion
To all my readers. Thankyou for reading this, your feedback means the world to me, you have no idea. But if you like my poem can you "like" it. You ...
Feb 28, 2010
