MattJF

Thank you for your review but the reason I didn't go into detail of the object of hunger in the poem is because who this person is is not important, ...

This poem is probably one of the best poems I think I have ever seen on this site. The sexuality of this is so powerful. I think I understand that ...

A hunger felt by no man, I feel for you each day. Like a ghost, my brain evaporated into grey smoke along with the ropes that bound me to this ...

A hunger felt by no man, I feel for you each day. Like a ghost, my brain evaporated into grey smoke along with the ropes that bound me to this ...

oh my god. I love you! Said exactly what was on my mind. Twilight is sooo overrated!!!

I was barely alive, till you entered my life. I was falling apart, till you gave me your heart. Now you pushing the limit, but I don't want to end ...

I love the poem. I completely relate to it. Someone who I was going out with broke up with me and never told me why. Just completely blanked me. I ...

Loved it! :)

In response to the previouse comment. Your right there is something about looking good, well thinking you look good that really gives me this feeling , like when you see ...

Hi Hidden! Very sweet, you must love your dog a lot! My favourite line is... "I hope he will never leave me" Its obvious here how much you care for ...

To be honest I was not expecting this. Your speaking from the heart. Which I can feel. I'm assuming that you are the girl in this poem and Chris is ...

Wow. That was brilliant, I love all of it nothing to criticise

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Hand me a bucket! I'm sorry but if you want to progress as a writer, then you have to get rid of this shit. I read it and I could ...

Hi Conrad. Loved your poem. Like a fairytale but very dark and edgy. You don't try to cover it up with happiness, just showing it in the original form. I ...