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Re: Güte
Hey, I really liked your piece. Personally i prefered the first segment as it had more action, though i did also enjoy the exceptional narrative of the further sections. However ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: Catch 22
Finished reading this a couple of weeks ago. Had heard both good and bad things about it, but have to admit it is probably one of the best books ive ...
Jul 23, 2009 -
Re: All Alone
I am all alone. And everyday it hurts me more and more. And now i just dont know what to do. I have nothing.
Jul 13, 2009 -
Re: Pendrop Feather (re-written)
Hey this is a promising so far. What you have is a nice introduction to the story and is well written and the puncuation, grammer, spelling etc etc is to ...
Mar 12, 2009 -
Re: Escaping the Lost City....
OK, first of all ill remind the two reviews for one post rule. If you do a couple of reviews more people are likely to review yours. I do like ...
Feb 4, 2009 -
Re: Fatal Attraction
I think people may be put off by the length of the segment. Try either cutting it down in size or perhaps post in the advantage critique section
Jan 28, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Box Prologue
Hey i really like this. It is well written and desriptive yet still suspenceful enough for me to be encouraged to read on., However i did notice one thing i ...
Nov 26, 2008 -
Re: Rotation of the Co-ordinate axis
Hey guys i now this might be a bit of a higher level than most questions on here but ill give it a shot anyway. Can any one explain to ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Not Always So
Wow. A Bellatrix narrative, i think it must be a first. Not that thats a problem of course, and harry potter fanfiction is an interesting fanfiction. I liked reading it, ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: Unspoken Words - prologue (working title)
I could have just said ‘because I hate writing’ and walk away but I couldn’t do that because: A) I love writing, just not novels and, B) She would bug ...
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: USA's Best President
kennedy was totally out of this world
Nov 21, 2008 -
Re: The Tale of Remus Lupin
Heya. I like the idea of a Lupin story and i see great potential for it. However i feel there are a couple of things that could be improved. I ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Worst Book You've Ever Read
Though i huge fan of HP, one for my least favourite books in HP and the Half Blood Prince I wouldnt say that it was bad, just very very disapointing
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Capital Punishment
Im sitting on the fence on this one. Whilst im for the idea that criminals will never be able to commit another crime as a result of capital punishment, the ...
Nov 6, 2008 -
Re: Rainiest parts of the world?
Id probably have to guess at the jungles around the equator. Although exeter does seem pretty wet right now to be honest
Nov 5, 2008