Masquerade

Hello. I'm Masque and I shall be reviewing your work today. Alright. The first thing I noticed about this is that it's not exactly a poem, but I find it ...

Wow, what an interesting poem. I'm not quite sure what to say about this, but I liked it! It sounded almost like a prose piece but broken up into lines ...

A figure sitting in a corner, hidden in shadow.

Hello there, I'm Masque, and I shall be reviewing your work today. -ehem- The plot itself of this story seems like it could be really interesting, but it needs to ...

6 Chemicals splash on the shores, Singeing the air with putrid fumes. This beach is closed to you; But why would you come anyway? Green toxins swirl and swish, Leaving ...

Hello Sakuragirl1, I'm Masque, and I shall be reviewing your work today. -puts on intelligent looking glasses- Key: Blue = Really like this Purple = This sounds awkward Red = ...

Rosey Unicorn actually came up with an idea two summers ago that answers that question and which we'll be implementing soon: Review Teams. What happens is those who wish to ...

Dear me, I keep forgetting to post my poems! I'll have to post them later... 5 - Painted Laughter falls satanically From our tight hinged jaws. You're face twists away, ...

4 - Ride it Out You know you've been down And out. You've resisted the waves. You can't destroy The moon; They're not going anywhere. It's so easy to get ...

3 - Peter The solar flare came, And our power petered. Lives slowly faded away. Only the strong-willed can survive. And the weak peter with the lights, Where the dark ...

2 - This Should Be Easy (working title) Inside the envelope there is nothing. Rippling words that flowed over paper And dripped, tasty, from red lips have failed me. The ...

I've been dabbling with unconventional form and doing a lot of poetic experimentation lately. You have been warned. 1 - Red Flag There's a hole in your soul, Standing way ...

Hello there, I'm Masque, and I shall be reviewing your poem today. -ehem- I really enjoyed this poem. I feel like it put the idea of war into words very ...

Hello. I am Masque, and I shall be reviewing your poem today. Firstly, as others have said, I liked the subject matter, because it isn't a way overused topic like ...

7/10 Cool pic, but to be an avatar it's so small that you can't really see what's in it too well.