Masquerade

Ahh yeah, we're awesome.

Hrmmm well maybe a dress like this dress: I could also be represented by a hippie too, if that's easier. (You know, long skirt, long hair, round sunglasses, headband).

Oh this is awesome! I would like to be um... maybe a girl wearing a masquerade mask... yes that sounds good. In a long dress!

Hello, I'm Masque and I shall be reviewing your chapter today. I thought this was an interesting start. There are a couple things I'd like to point out. You had ...

Hello, I'm Masque and I shall be reviewing your chapter today. Okay, so luckily for you (or maybe unluckily) I am in a good mood, so I shall go through ...

Hello, I am Masque, and I shall be reviewing your prologue. -ehem- This was an interesting prologue. It gave me enough information to be curious without giving too much away. ...

11 This is a happy poem to challenge all others. And darn it, you will like my happy poem. They say I can't do it, can only write dark, But ...

10 The men came over the fields like ants and mowed them down with brutal haste. They slashed and cut and lives fell, With a chattering, to the ground. The ...

9 The words I worship drip, distastefully, from your lips And onto the floor, where they run and spread Until they are thin and meaningless rabble. I try to salvage ...

Yes! I'm so excited for this.

Wow, I really enjoyed this prologue. It was short, but not too short, and it left me wondering, and didn't reveal too much bout the setting and characters. Who are ...

On the contrary, I think it is a beautiful poem. I'm kind of amazed that you wrote it when you were so young. The ideas are simple, but it was ...

8 Numbers crash in my head; They don't dance. Strange, how easily creation flows, Wildly, randomly, with no rules. But a repeating sequence will stagger. My imagination can vomit up ...

Okay, so I have a bunch of poems I have been neglecting to post... so I shall slowly post them. 7 I can't help but remember Your cascading words, Glowing ...

Hello. I am Masque and I shall be reviewing your story today. Green = My comments Red = Edits Purple = This sounds awkward. King Iroham sits upon his throne, ...