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Re: One of my Character plots
Thanks, I edited it :) Yea, I'm bad at spelling and stuff... but I'm a good writer.
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Three Troops - Chapter 1: Surprise!
You're welcome, I'm new to the site so don't get when or were to see when something new is up! So if you'd like I got msn to contact me! ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: One of my Character plots
This is one of many of my Character like plots, just a random section of writing about one of many Characters I'm going to be using in a novel I'm ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: The Hidden Treasure
Hello Lily! I enjoyed this read quite a bit, it was small but it was one that got to the point right away, like boom... bam... here it is, and ...
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: I need a new topic!
Hmm, "Bad-fiction" Is always fun, like unicorns and vampires falling in love xD
Jan 8, 2011 -
Re: Bus Stop
Alright, didn't want to post a review without completely getting it! ha, anyhow here is my review. I liked the concept of this poem, and the ending made me smile.. ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Three Troops - Chapter 1: Surprise!
Hello, I never start my reviews with anything negative so I wont, But this is one great story! I love to read story's about the war... Normally WWII tho, but ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Bus Stop
Before I post a reveiw, I'd like to ask... did he just get hit by a bus at the end? My brain is half asleep tongiht.
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Symptoms of love
This poem is also not one of my best, I lost a lot of the ones off my iPod and right now it's late and I'm way to lazy to ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Stolen
I don't know if I quite grasped the concept but to me I take this poem as the typical teenage relationships? I know it isn't but the way it starts ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Foot prints in the snow
My poems in english tend to be cut short, by the whyspers of children, and the beauty of the snow outside the window.
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: To Fall Beneath One's Shadow
Awe, I can't say anything about the structure or rhythm? haha, just kidding! Any how, the good thing about poetry is that one doesn't have to make sense, rhyme, or ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Foot prints in the snow
Thanks, all the reveiws are helpful and I think I'm going to take in all of it. I'm going to add some of the stuff you guys said, but not ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Chatroom... Dont want to wait.
You wait 24 hours of course. There are plenty of things to do around the site. First and foremostly, literary works. You can begin to critique or even just read ...
Jan 7, 2011 -
Re: Chatroom... Dont want to wait.
I'm not sure what wait time you're talking about? As far as I know, there isn't one. When I joined it told me, I got to wait 24/h cause I'm ...
Jan 7, 2011