MaskedGurl

It's great, it's simple but well written. -MaskedGurl

Alot of people tend to have these same questions, i like it it's beautiful.

alot of people can relate to it, with the fear of roller coasters it's good. Maybe you should expand on it and make it a bigger story.

Great job, i enjoyed reading the poem :)

Thankyou most of what i write is about my experiences and the experiences of those close to me. I'll remember that for next time :)

wow its... wow i can realte to some of what you've written its got alot of emotion great work - MaskedGurl

That's amazing you capture the way a girl yearn to love someone she can't so well

Thankyou,i honestly ddn't think it was that good my moods and different situations inspre what i write about.

The smile and laugh is only a mask to fool the world, memories from the past haunt her as she sleeps she'll never love the way she once did, she ...

It's beautiful,i like the way you have used the seasons to create imergery is amazing i enjoyed reading your poem. - Danielle