Masala

thanks for the review. I'm having trouble with the formatting. I didn't mean for it to be all indented and when I preview it it's not like that so I'm ...

Thank you all for your reviews. But I did want to clear some things up. The image of the crow I used in the second stanza is not referring to ...

I Love You I love you, More than the Sun, Loves the Moon. I love you, More than a song, Loves it's tune. I love you, More than the night, ...

Chapter 1 I was being hunted. My heart raced wildly, threatening to break free from my chest as I ran at my full speed through the forest. My throat ached ...

I have really enjoyed this beginning of a story. I agree with some of the other reviewers that the beginning grabs you in and holds your attention. I don't find ...

I didn't get a nice feel from the poem. To me it reminded me of a Country Western song, which does not mean it's bad but just needs some work ...

Remembrance It had started, simply enough with a fork It was just a fork, what harm could it do? Like a lone citizen standing in front of a tank The ...

I loved this poem, very moving and emotional. Their days are not numbered, But as they're marching and crying, They hope by the Grace of God, That they might be ...

I thought the poem was cute but not original enough to grab my interest to pass it off to a friend. I think you have a lot of emotion behind ...

The Letter The letter; she's been waiting Days, upon days, upon days Hope flies into her heart at life's promises But the fear and dread come unwanted Doubt in her ...

I didn't like the story for the same reasons everyone else liked it. This was way too sad. I was hoping for a romantic story not a drama. At the ...

I found the story to be a little confusing. First, I thought the main character was a woman and then I thought she was a lesbian so when I found ...

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So, more information? For enjoyment I mostly read romance fiction, Suzanne Brockmann is one of my favorite authors. I've read the more popular fantasy series, i.e. Harry Potter and Twilight ...

Hello everyone, I'm Masala, but you can call me Liz and I just joined. So to introduce myself, I live in the US; Oregon more specifically. I attend college, (at ...