MaryQuiteContrary

I think on the last line you mean to "expect" the very worst. Other than that let me say that I know how you feel. I've been having similar thoughts ...

I like it! The out of focus bits add a dreamy atmosphere. Good job!

That sounds like an indictment of internet message boards in general. And a very good one at that!

It sounds like someone who is preparing for a battle or some other task that may very well end in their death. The first half was very coherent but the ...

That was a very cute, compact poem. At first I thought it would be too trite, but I ended up liking it very much.

Yikes! I certainly feel bad for the girl in the story, but I think she may have taken things too far. The desperation is evident. I would have liked her ...

I've had a few of those and they are always bittersweet. I pine away for what could have been, what I felt should have been. Sometimes, though, it's best. You ...

Ugh, I'm sorry, that really sucks. On the bright side you managed to encompass an entire young person's life in one dramatic encounter. I get the feeling that anything else ...

There's a couple of spelling errors: With the knowledge that I know posses Not bad but they're right up front and it made me look for others. For me some ...

What a nice way to sum up a perfect autumn day.I was half-expecting something bad to happen so I was relieved when it stay pleasant til the end.

This rates really high on the creepy meter. Nothing is said overtly, but the metaphors are enough to let my imagination fill in the blanks. Good job!

I like this poem. It definitely captures the transition from child to adult nicely. One thing that brought me out a bit was the change from first person here: At ...