MaryJaneStallheizer

I thought this was a good start! I could feel the yearning in this song. It really did reach out to you. Keep on writing!

This was a very beautiful and deep thinking poem. I enjoyed reading it. I found this poem very fascinating. My favorite line has to be For living is living and ...

Wow this is just a stunning piece of work. I was in love with every part of this short story. Words can't describe how beautiful and elegant this is. Never ...

I really liked this poem! It is very emotional and touching. It sort of reminds me of the poems I write. I hope you keep on writing, and I look ...

I love this! My favorite part line has to be Imagination; the key to a colorful life I think that's something that the world forgets every now and then. It ...

Very touching poem! This truly was a terrible tragedy what happened to the little girl. This poem had a nice flow and it was very emotional. Keep up the great ...

This was hauntingly brilliant. I had goosebumps the whole time reading this. It really gave me a shiver through my spine. I hope you continue to write more poems with ...

Life has so much in it, we all have different stories to tell, so much to offer. However, life consists of three things: hopes, depths, and despairs. How is this ...

Great poem! I really understand how the character feels. People say that my name is weird and strage too. I would always ask my mom- "why didn't you name me ...

These are pretty good! I love how you made the eyes in your first drawings. The only thing i would suggest is to color a little more neatley in the ...

This is a really good poem. I'm inferring this poem is talking about racism, and this is not an easy topic to write about. However you made it sound really ...

Pretty good! My favorite part of this poem was A false impression of kindness and joy, She is a traitor disguised as a friend This spoke to me as a ...

I really enjoyed this poem! I definatly agree with some of the other posts about the imagery in the poem, because it was phenomenal! The only thing I thought was ...

This was a brilliant poem. It was a little hard for me to read because I can relate to some parts of it. This is a character who I can ...

I loved this poem! The gentleness and simplicity in this poem just makes it beautiful