MaryJaneStallheizer

God Does Not Make Mistakes. No. He doesn't. I hate saying this, but I feel as if he might I always thought that I've been a good person Someone who ...

Gray. That's how she saw the world. Everyday was a storm for her. Even when she tried to pull her jacket tighter she still felt cold. Everyday this storm compiled ...

I have recentley lost my grandmother, and I found myself relating to this in so many ways. I am absolutley marveled by your writing. Words can't describe how beautiful this ...

I agree with the other comments that it was a really imaginative way how you compared a man to a puppet. I have never read anything like this before and ...

I really found this poem to be emotional especially the fact that it is a true story. This poem reminds me of how peer pressure can really influence a person. ...

I wake up each day To the touch of his fingers. His fingers are like a million kisses upon my cheek, They wrap me up in velvet lace And I ...

Hey there! Let me first of all say I have definatley been in the shoes of this character in the poem. I've often thought about if I did die, what ...

Wow, this really is quite deep and emotional. These kind of poems are definatley the hardest for me to read and I can understand the character's feeling quite well in ...

I really loved this poem. It had a smooth flow and was very merry. Like the other comments, the rhyming was excellent! I thought it was not possible to have ...

Wow, this was quite impressive. Even though it was short, I had to read it a couple times to get it in my head. It was very beautiful and had ...

Wait, can you hear the strain in my voice? I am not ready for this Tick Tock goes the clock, but I am not moving any furthur Here I am ...

Hey I really liked this! I often ask myself this question over and over again. What really is time? What would the world be like without the idea of time. ...

This is such a beautiful poem! I love the meaning behind it all. I agree with the other comment that you're never to young to find love. This poem is ...

This is such a touching poem! I have had an experience like this and i understand the pain that goes through. Its such a terrible feeling, but you have transformed ...

This is a really moving poem. I myself could relate to many parts in this poem. My favorite line has to be I no longer feel the breeze from the ...