Mars

Hey Alpha! I must say, this piece has a load of potential. I love the way you foreshadowed with the man in the movie theatre, and then threw in the ...

-stalkstalkstalk- Welcome! I see Vyper has beaten me to explaining the rules and stuff, so I'll just ditto everything she said. Oh, and also. You've probably noticed that some members ...

Ooh! Let's switch places! I have a friend from Germany and she's always making me jealous with all the cool history courses she got to take. Hehe. And I love ...

The cemetery near my flat. It's absolutely ravishing.

Arcaus, I think the main thing is that you have to find an idea that you're really passionate about. Planning can help, because once you know what's going to happen, ...

Liz! Hello! I decided that I couldn't not see what you were writing. So, here I am! And as everyone's noticed, there are a few typos that could be easily ...

Eulogy Chrysanthemums line the path I walk As I roam the graveyard at close of day. Wondering if the dead could talk- What have they seen, what would they say? ...

Hello Sarah! Since you've already read the rules, I won't mention the 2:1 ratio or no chat speak . Haha, I know, I'm sneaky. Yay! Another paranormal fan! I'll be ...

Hello TSun! I'll begin to really review your piece in a mo, but I do have to agree that grammar is important. I know, I know, I hate being bothered ...

TS Eliot. And check out some of Shakespeare's sonnets as well. And ee cummings.

Hello Minimac! I'm going to review this, but I'm afraid it might be a bit short, as there's not much to critique! As dd9 said, you really did portray the ...

Hello Natalie! It's always nice to see more poets on the site. As you've said a few times, this was pretty abstract, which is fine, but let's try and revise ...

Hi MySunshine! You are my sunshine, my only sunshine...couldn't resist. xD Is your name from that song? So, if you haven't already, it's a good idea to check out the ...

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*sigh* I'm moving. I spend all day tomorrow on a plane and then I'll have zero internet/communication with civilization for, like, a week. But perhaps I can finally finish (start) ...