Mars

Hiyas! I'm Mars, ready to review. First of all, I hope those are not your titles (A Girl Who's Been Cheated and Anger), just because I don't think that either ...

I'm just thankful to June's facebook status, for alerting me of YWS' return. *hugs yewis*

Heya, Moriah Leila! Here as you requested. First of all, the grammar isn't completely up to par. Mostly, you're missing a few commas, and there was one place where I'm ...

QUESO*! WELCOME. So! Daughter mentioned the most important rules already-you can find the rest here. Anywhoodles, you might be noticing that some users have different colored names? Blue = Greeters, ...

Ooh! Lovely improvements, Zakku. And (eep) it's Friday the thirteenth in three days! DO NOT GO TO THE MOVIES. So! Anyway, I did notice a few little errors that I ...

Bump. This thread makes me giggle.

Also my mom, but she's not a member. :C Or is she? I tattle on everyone. You guys rock.

'Allo Persnikety! I hope you don't mind if I review this for ya? ... Didn't think so. Let's go! *dives into The Marble Horse* Mom’s voice was airy as she ...

She was sure she’d seen him before, somewhere on campus, but couldn’t place him definitely. Are you...continuing the flashback from the previous part? That would make sense. It would work, ...

Huzzannah, I might not have too much to say about this, except, stop making me jealous with you prose talent. Srsly. :P Okay so anyway: (though it caused her untold ...

What's this? A critique? Get rid of your first line, 'cause it sucks. JUST PLAYIN. I LOVE IT. Okay. For reals now. I promise. a girl that'd make me feel ...

I'm drinking my last hurricane Like jamais vu on crack cocaine Your hazel eyes drive me insane. The chemistry is frying my brain It's much too tangible to explain I'm ...

Hi Jessica! Here I am. I'll start out kind of nitpicky, comments in bold, and then tell you my overall impressions of the piece. How come the stars never fail ...

Why should grammar matter? To answer your question as to why it's important: a couple of reasons. First of all, it helps you become a better writer. Kind of a ...

Your blog = my next stop. She lived in Berlin, but now she's with me in the UK. Haha, but yeah, I think everyone here can relate to you. I ...