Mars

Okay, sonnets = win. I had to review this. Basically, I see some rhythm imperfections. Like dearest Cousin Ben - the way I'm reading it, it's too many syllables, and ...

Well...there's not much we can do unless you post it up. And don't worry about criticism, because we'll all do our best to help. But anyway, if you're worried about ...

Everyone else gave great advice! If you're still stuck, here is a good place to browse for inspiration. (What can't the internet do? :D)

Can I be a Greeter so that my name will match my eyes? >.>

I gots it. Blue Meanies! (you guys have all seen the Yellow Submarine movie, right?)

You should probably rethink the words you're saying. I won't explain why, but I hope someone does soon. Psh. Family site. >.>

Dear, would you mind reviewing this ? It's in need of a lot of work, I'm afraid, but I just don't know what to do with it. Daniel Other Fiction ...

Be Not Afraid I meet him at the battle field on a snowy day. "Are you sure you want to challenge me?" Lawrence Raeburn smirks, removing his mittens. He shifts ...

Hey! Mars here to review. Let's get started, shall we? *** When the sun slowly falls, and the silver moon may rise, I escape into the night and dream about ...

Meadow, you're like...cowgirl on a bike. Which equals really cute. ^^

Ooh yeah we need a ref! Lawl. This would make his ego so huge if he knew. Threnody- I love the blue! So pretty. Angel- You're so cute! *steals necklace* ...

Rosey and Angie, you guys can compete for him. He's single. XD Threnody, you're so cute! Awh.

YWS has changed my life. Using this product has made me happier, healthier, wealthier, and more attractive to the opposite sex. The price is reasonable and the result is wonderful! ...

Lauren, I want your dress! *cries* Anyway. [spoiler] [/spoiler] Me and a friend. I'm the girl. ;-)

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